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kelly
작성자 : jeo*** · 2015-06-11
I am happy. Because i ate ice cream.
I lesson finished and write english diary.
I am very happy. Because i had bubble shower.
katherine teacher~
Thank you very much~
see you next time~
bye bye~
kelly...
I lesson finished and write english diary.
I am very happy. Because i had bubble shower.
katherine teacher~
Thank you very much~
see you next time~
bye bye~
kelly...
답변
I am happy. Because i ate ice cream.
I lesson finished and write english diary.
I am very happy. Because i had bubble shower.
katherine teacher~
Thank you very much~
see you next time~
bye bye~
kelly...
I lesson finished and write english diary.
I am very happy. Because i had bubble shower.
katherine teacher~
Thank you very much~
see you next time~
bye bye~
kelly...
>> I am happy because I ate ice cream.
I finished the lesson and writing my English diary.
>> I am very happy because I had a bubble shower.
Teacher Kathline, thank you very much.
See you next time~
Bye bye~
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* Capitalization
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