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homework to teacher Marie

작성자 : sky***   ·   2015-06-10

I did a English test today with a pen. My teacher got mad. And when I wrote letters I did it with coloring pencils.
I had a math test today too. And when I wrote the numbers I did it with a pen aswell. My teacher got even more mader.
At my piano class I did a coloring book....Im so bad....^^
And at bed my mom told me a story.

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I did a English test today with a pen.
>> I took an English test day. First I answred the paper with a pen then I used a color pencil.
>> we say "an English..." not "a English.


My teacher got mad.
>>this sentence is good

 

And when I wrote letters I did it with coloring pencils.
>> remove this sentence.

I had a math test today too. And when I wrote the numbers I did it with a pen aswell.
>> I also took a test in math and again I used a pen and color pencils with it.


My teacher got even more mader.
>> this sentence is good.

At my piano class I did a coloring book....Im so bad....^^
>> In piano class I colored a coloring book, it was bad.

And at bed my mom told me a story.
>> At bedtime, mom told me a story.
>> we use preposition "At" for parts of the day like "at night", "At noon", "At lunch" etc.]

 

preposition "At" for parts of the day like "at night", "At noon", "At lunch" etc.]


 


 

Thank you for doing your homework. Claire. You seem sleepy in class, hope you can get some rest.


 

T. Marie

 

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