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homework to teacher Marie

작성자 : sky***   ·   2015-06-08

I went to the classroom and saw teacher marie. she was going to the cafeteria I kept calling her but she didn't even answer. she was eating a cupcake, it was her birthday. I was ingnoring that. ha ha........... I went to the library after eating lunch. I saw teacher Marie again. I was supprised very very much. at resess I saw my teacher (Marie) again at the school play ground. I was even more supprised. Finaly, I got to say happy birthday. It was fun.

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           I went to the classroom and saw teacher marie.
>> ... teacher Marie. [proper names are capitalized] 

she was going to the cafeteria I kept calling her but she didn't even answer.
>> She was going...[first letter in a sentence is capitalized].

 

she was eating a cupcake, it was her birthday.
I was ingnoring that. ha ha...........
>> Spelling Check : I-g-n-o-r-i-n-g

I went to the library after eating lunch. I saw teacher Marie again. I was supprised very very much.
>> Remove one "very".

 
at resess I saw my teacher (Marie) again at the school play ground.
>> Spelling check : r-e-c-e-s-s.

I was even more supprised.
>> Spelling Check : s-u-r-p-r-I-s-e-d

Finaly, I got to say happy birthday. It was fun.
>> Spelling Check : f-I-n-a-l-l-y


 


 

Hi Claire!

Good work making your won MADLIB using the words I gave you for your homework. We'll practice making more short stories tomorrow since clearly making only sentences is a piece of cake for you.


 

Love

T. Marie

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