I went to the classroom and saw teacher marie.
>> ... teacher Marie. [proper names are capitalized]
she was going to the cafeteria I kept calling her but she didn't even answer.
>> She was going...[first letter in a sentence is capitalized].
she was eating a cupcake, it was her birthday.
I was ingnoring that. ha ha...........
>> Spelling Check : I-g-n-o-r-i-n-g
I went to the library after eating lunch. I saw teacher Marie again. I was supprised very very much.
>> Remove one "very".
at resess I saw my teacher (Marie) again at the school play ground.
>> Spelling check : r-e-c-e-s-s.
I was even more supprised.
>> Spelling Check : s-u-r-p-r-I-s-e-d
Finaly, I got to say happy birthday. It was fun.
>> Spelling Check : f-I-n-a-l-l-y
Hi Claire!![]()
Good work making your won MADLIB using the words I gave you for your homework. We'll practice making more short stories tomorrow since clearly making only sentences is a piece of cake for you.
Love
T. Marie ![]()