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My favorite animal

작성자 : gml***   ·   2015-06-04

My favorite animal is horse.
Because, horse is to fast.
I like fast.When, I ride the horse it is fun.
So, I go to the Jeju island, I want to be ride a horse.
So, I like horse

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My favorite animal is horse.
Because, a horse is too fast.
I like fast animalsIt is fun to ride a horse. I went to Jeju island because I wanted to ride a horse.
So, I like horse

Note:
*Spelling: TOO
*I like fast (adjective) animals (noun).
*Past tense of GO is WENT; WANT - WANTED

Hello, Erin! It could have been better if you made your composition longer and with more details. Good work, though.:) Thank you for submitting your homework!

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