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dog and cat

작성자 : gml***   ·   2015-05-28

Dogs and cats are similarties.
Dogs and cats are animals.
And they are have baby.They are cute.So,people love them.But, they are differances,too.
Dogs,save the house.But,sometimes they are give damage for other people.
Cats are great anomals.
They jump up high place.And they be bold th high place.
but, they are dagerous aimals.
Cats has sharpa toenail.
Dogs and cats are have many similarties and difference.
but,I like both them.

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Dogs and cats have similarities. They are both animals. They can have babies. They are cute so people love them. They also have differences. Dogs can guard your house. But, sometimes they are give damage to people.
Cats are great animals. They can jump up onto a high place. And they be bold th high place. They can be dangerous too because they have sharp nails.
Dogs and cats are have many similarities and differences but I like both them.

Note:
*Use THEY to refer to the dogs and cats you have already been mentioned
*Use CAN to express abilities and possibilities
*ONTO means into a position on

Erin, it's important that you read the corrected composition above and analyze the corrections made in it. Take note of the corrections. Good job! Your thinking skills are getting better.:)

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