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작성자 : kwa***   ·   2015-05-26

My ideal beauty is ‘independence and strong’. In many dramas, most of the female characters lean on male characters. I don’t like to see that kind of thing, because we, female also have enough power to live alone, without males’ help. Also, I don’t like people who are very confident or believe in-about their appearance and not trying anything. They need to be ‘strong’. Beauty isn’t just appearance, it can also mean people’s mind and characteristics. So I think people need to have strong mind.

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My ideal beauty is 'independence and strong'. In many dramas, most of the female characters lean on male characters. I don't like to see that kind of thing, because we, female also have enough power to live alone, without males' help. Also, I don't like people who are very confident or believe in-about their appearance and not trying anything. They need to be 'strong'. Beauty isn't just appearance, it can also mean people's mind and characteristics. So I think people need to have strong mind.

>> My idea of beauty has something to do with independence and strength. In many dramas, most female characters lean on the male characters. I don't like to see that kind of thing because we, females, also have enough power to live alone, without a man's help. I also don't like people who are very confident and dependent on their physique. They need to be strong. Beauty isn't just about the appearance of a person, it's also about someone's intelligence and characteristics. So I think people need to be mentally strong as well.

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