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H.W.
작성자 : seo*** · 2015-05-21
If I were an animal, I want to be a fox.
Because fox have a very beautiful silky fur, and so cool. And the fox cub is
really adorable!
Also, I want to be a bird. I don't care any kind of bird, because I just like to
fly for the sky. But, I would especially want to be a eagle, the swan, or a
penguin. Well, the eagle looks ausome and very fast, the swan is beautiful and
romantic, and a penguin is cute! It has a short, warm fur, and I think the
penguin's breast will be cozy. I want to get in there!
Because fox have a very beautiful silky fur, and so cool. And the fox cub is
really adorable!
Also, I want to be a bird. I don't care any kind of bird, because I just like to
fly for the sky. But, I would especially want to be a eagle, the swan, or a
penguin. Well, the eagle looks ausome and very fast, the swan is beautiful and
romantic, and a penguin is cute! It has a short, warm fur, and I think the
penguin's breast will be cozy. I want to get in there!
답변
If I were an animal, I wanted to be a fox.
Because a fox has a very beautiful, silky fur and it's so cool. And the A fox cub is really adorable!Also, I wanted to be a bird too. I don't care what bird would I be, because I just like to fly in the sky. But, I would also especially want to be an eagle, a swan, or a penguin. Well, the eagle is very fast and looks awesome, the swan is beautiful and romantic, and the penguin is cute! It has a short, warm fur, and I think the penguin's body is cozy. I want to get in there!
Note:
*in the sky
*wanted (past tense)
*penguin's body is cozy
Sarah, read the composition again. There are words that are removed and words that are added to make the sentence better. Thank you for submitting your homework! :)