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작성자 : woo*** · 2015-05-19
Answer: It’s important to have a clear conscience. Because if people have clear conscience, people will not lie. So it makes good friendships. Another reason is people will not fraud. That means people would not steal something from anybody, and because people will consider each other. It makes people happy. The last reason is if people have clear conscience, they will act like this: When people did a bad thing, they would have felt the pang of conscience. And that stops the robbery and it makes good world.
So I think having a clear conscience is important.
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Question: How important is it to have a clear conscience?
Answer: It's important to have a clear conscience. Because if people have clear conscience, people will not lie.
>> First, because if people have a clear conscience, they wont lie.
So it makes good friendships.
>> So it makes a good friendship.
Another reason is people will not fraud. That means people would not steal something from anybody, and because people will consider each other.
>> because people will consider each other (as?)
>> because people will be considerate to each other
It makes people happy.
The last reason is if people have clear conscience, they will act like this: When people did a bad thing, they would have felt the pang of conscience. And that stops the robbery and it makes good world.
So I think having a clear conscience is important.
>> Finally,
>>it makes a better world
>> Therefore, having a clear conscience is important.