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작성자 : seu***   ·   2015-05-18

Homework
1.do jump rope every day
2.go to bed and wake up early
3.walk to near places
4.eat healty food
5.wash hands

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essay

Let's read books

Nowadays, almost people think studying in academy is easiest and most convenient way to learn. But, there is a lot of other easy way to study. I recommend to you reading books. Because It's not hard to study and fun then other way. Also, when you gets interesting in books, then it makes you easier to study.

Before you start to read books, you will have to make library card. It's because you can't buy all books that you will read. When you make one, you should borrow books that is different genre. Of course you should read them. Math, science, history, novel etc. Genre is various. There will be one genre that you like. When you find genre that you like, borrow books that is your likable genre as the center next time. But don't borrow only that genre's book. You must borrow other genre's book one or two. Then you can accumulate various topic's knowledge. You might hate reading books if you read thick and hard book at first. When you read thin book first, books will thicker. Then you should steadily form a habit to read books. If not, you will getting not read books. When you finish read books, write a book review. If you difficult to write book review because you read a lot of books, then write a book list. Write a title, author, publishing house, date, and write what I felt in this book in one line. If you follow this way, you can read books and learn easy.

I like novels. So I read novels a lot, and I will be a novelist. Books are help all jobs, even it's not a job about books. So I hope you read books a lot.

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Homework
1. Do jump rope every day
2. Go to bed and wake up early
3. Walk to near places
4. Eat healthy food
5. Wash hands

ESSAY

Let's read books!

Nowadays, almost all people think that studying in academy is the easiest and most convenient way to learn. But there are lots of other easy ways to study. I recommend reading books because it's not hard to study and more fun than the other ways. Also, when you get interested in books, it would be easier for you to learn.

Before you start to read books, you have to get a library card first. It's because you can't buy all books that you have to read. When you get one, you should borrow books with different genres. Of course you should read them. There are various genres. Math, Science, History, novels, etc. There could be one genre that you will really like. Borrow the books of your preferred genre but remember that you should borrow books with other genres, too. Then you can accumulate various topic's knowledge. You might hate reading books if you read thick and hard books at first. So I suggest that you should read thin books first until you get used to reading books. With this technique, reading thick books won't be hard for you. Then you will steadily form a habit of read books. When you finish reading the books, write book reviews. If it is difficult for you to write book reviews because you read a lot of books, then write a book list. Write the title, author, publishing house, date, and write what you learned from the book in one sentence. If you follow this way, you can read books and learn easier.

I like novels so I read novels a lot. I will be a novelist someday. Books are helpful to everyone because of the information and knowledge that you could acquire from them. So I encourage you to read a lot of books.

>> Sarah! Good luck to your English Essay Competition!
Good luck!

Teacher Sena

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