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작성자 : jie***   ·   2015-05-15

Mother Teresa was a great person. She helped people who needed help. Like old person, poor person. So she even got a Nobel prize for peace. And she borned in 1910, and died in 1997. She is my role model because she helped many people. She helped people by giving them food, or bed. She tried her best to help poor people. And when I grow up, I will help poor people too.

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Mother Teresa was a great person. She helped people who needed help. Like old person, poor person. So she even got a Nobel prize for peace. And she borned in 1910, and died in 1997. She is my role model because she helped many people. She helped people by giving them food, or bed. She tried her best to help poor people. And when I grow up, I will help poor people too.

>> Mother Teresa was a great person. She helped people in need, like old and poor people. She even got a Nobel Prize for Peace. She was born in 1910 and died in 1997. She is my role model because she helped many people. She helped people by giving them food, and a place to stay. She tried her best to help poor people and when I grow up, I will help poor people too.

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