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작성자 : sky*** · 2015-05-11
1. people need trees because they give us oxygen.
2. I've beaten my sister in running.
3. I am a citizen from this countury
2. I've beaten my sister in running.
3. I am a citizen from this countury
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Good day, Claire! 
1. people need trees because they give us oxygen.
>> People need trees because they give us oxygen.
2. I've beaten my sister in running. 
3. I am a citizen from this countury
>> I am a citizen of this country.
VERY GOOD CLAIRE!~ Just remember the following corrections :)
Love, t. Jhen