Intro - My friend's name is Ye won Kim.

She likes reading webtoon. So, her hobby is collecting webtoon character things ; cup, notebook and clothes...
~> She likes reading webtoons. So, her hobby is collecting webtoon character things such as cups, notebooks and clothes.


Body - She does it on Saturdays or Sundays. She goes to the 'Webtoon shop' and buy webtoon character things. Because she likes reading webtoon and
collecting something.
~> She does it on Saturdays or Sundays. She goes to the "Webtoon shop" and buy webtoon collectables.
VOCABULARY: collectable ~> any object that people want to collect as a hobby. 

Ending - When she buy things, she looks very happy.
~> When she buys things, she looks very happy.

                My friend's name is Ye won Kim. She likes reading webtoons. So, her hobby is collecting webtoon character things such as cups, notebooks and clothes. She does it on Saturdays or Sundays. She goes to the "Webtoon shop" and buy webtoon collectables. When she buys things, she looks very happy.