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작성자 : hsj*** · 2015-05-06
Title : super hero
I would like to be Thor, god of thunder.
I have two reasons why I want to be Thor.
First, I want to be gods. Gods are special.
Second, I want to control the thunder. It looks cool.
I would like to be Thor, god of thunder.
I have two reasons why I want to be Thor.
First, I want to be gods. Gods are special.
Second, I want to control the thunder. It looks cool.
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Title : super hero
I would like to be Thor, god of thunder.
I have two reasons why I want to be Thor.
First, I want to be a god. Gods are special.
Second, I want to control the thunder. It looks cool.
Hi, Emily!
Thank you for doing your homework. You did really great. All is well-written however, please be mindful of using singular and plural nouns.
- Teacher Joyce :)