Title: if i will be an aniaml
~>Title:  If I will be an animal

if i want to be ananimal,i would be a tiger.
~> If I will be an animal, I would be a tiger.

because tiger is one of the symbol in our country.
and also, tiger is one of my favorite animal.
~> Because tiger is one of the symbols of our country and it is also one of my favorite animals.

besides,when i see a picture of a brave tiger,i feel proud of myself.
~> Besides, when I see a picture of a brave tiger, I feel proud of myself.

that is the reason why i want to be a tiger.
~> Those are the reasons why I want to be a tiger.

           If I will be an animal, I would be a tiger. Because tiger is one of the symbols of our country and it is also one of my favorite animals. Besides, when I see a picture of a brave tiger, I feel proud of myself. Those are the reasons why I want to be a tiger.