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작성자 : dwl***   ·   2015-05-01

I think Avengers 2 is not have actions than Avengers 1.
But I think that is more zoom in on Korea beacause it's fillmed in Korea.
So, I zoom in to that and see the Seoul.
However, there too many CG in Seoul, so that is not very presence in that movie.
In that movie, subway route is next to river.
Of course in Seoul, that is exist next to the river.
But that subway route is not in that place.(In movie, it is next to 63 bulding.)
And, that subway's seat is not like Korea's subway seat.
So I think Seoul is not very presence in that movie.
So, I think the Sokobia is more main place than Seoul.
But the Sokobia is imagined place.
Actually it's all true story.
The main thing is as expected fillm is Sokobia's rise.
And big shild's airplain helped Avengers and they're won.
That's a good movie, I'll see it again later.

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I think Avengers 2 is not action-packed compared to Avengers 1.
But I think Koreans zoom in on the Avengers 2 because much of the film was shot in Seoul. So, I zoom in to that and see the Seoul.
However, Seoul was not noticeable in the film.
In that movie, The subway route is next to the river.
Of course in Seoul, that is exist next to the river.
The arrangement of the seats on the subway is not how it is in real life.
So I think Seoul is not very presence in that movie.
So, I think the Sokovia is more noticeable in the film than Seoul.
But the Sokovia is an imaginary place.
Actually it's all true story.
The main thing is as expected fillm is Sokobia's rise.
The big S.H.I.E.L.D helicarrier helped Avengers and they won.
That's a good movie, I'll see it again later.

I think Avengers 2 is not action-packed compared to Avengers 1. Koreans zoom in on the Avengers 2 because much of the film was shot in Seoul. However, Seoul was not noticeable in the film. The subway route is next to the river. The arrangement of the seats on the subway is not how it is in real life. I think the Sokovia is more noticeable in the film than Seoul, but Sokovia is an imaginary place. The big S.H.I.E.L.D helicarrier helped Avengers and they won.

Note:
*action-packed - [adjective] full of exciting events
*noticeable - [adjective] easy to see
*imaginary - [adjecive] not real
*helicarrier - the aircraft carrier of the defense agency S.H.I.E.L.D
*CORRECT SPELLING: Sokovia

Hello, Eric! I researched about The Avengers 2 just to understand the story and your composition about it. As you know, I haven't seen this movie.^^ Anyway, I'm happy that you take risk on using ZOOM IN ON.:) Enjoy your weekend!

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