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작성자 : seo***   ·   2015-04-30

My Summer Vacation Plan

I want to practice flute more.
I will like to have a bob cut.
I will practice Ping-Png more.
I will learn more about japanish.
I want to make a lot of diserts ,cookies and breads.
I will try something special that I never tried.
And I will have a sleeping party with my friends.

답변

I want to practice the flute more.
I would like to have a bob cut.
I will practice Ping-Pong more.
I will learn more about Japanese.
I want to make a lot of desserts ,cookies and breads.
I will try something special that I have never tried.
And I will have a slumber party with my friends.

Note:
*Use THE before any singular (=one) musical instrument.
Example: I practice the flute every weekend.

*would like - to want
Example: I would like some bread, please.

*Correct spelling: PING-PONG, JAPANESE, DESSERTS

*We use Present Perfect tense when an action performed during a period hasn't finished yet
Form: has/have + past participle of the verb
Example: I have never tried skateboarding. (maybe soon I will try it) 

*Slumber party / Pajama party - when a group of friends spend the night at a friend's house

Sarah, thank your for submitting your homework. Take note of the corrections made in your composition. Enjoy your weekend! :)

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