To. T.Jhen
Hi. I would like to invite you to my birthday party. It's on October 11th. The party will begin at 11am and will end at 6pm. The party will start at my house, but maybe we will go outside.
There will be lots of game( Do you like monopoly?), dancing, contests and lastly, freebies. We will eat lots of food. Also we have ice cream, kimbab, cake and waffles. If you want to come to the party, come to 667 dark avenue on villainous street. Call 010-3739-1977 if you have more questions.
Remember, if you want hard study time than playing all day long, YOU DON'T HAVE TO COME AT ALL.
If you love parties,then run!
Katherine...
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Dear T.Jhen,
Hi! I would like to invite you to my birthday party. It's on October 11th. The party will begin at 11am and will end at 6pm. *The party will begin from 11am to/until 6pm. The party will start at my house, but maybe we will go outside. *The party will be held in my house, but maybe we will go outside. ('will be held' means "this will take place")
There will be lots of game( Do you like monopoly?), dancing, contests and lastly, freebies. *There will be lots of game like monopoly, dancing contests and lastly, freebies. Do you like that? We will eat lots of food. Also we have ice cream, kimbab, cake and waffles. *We will also eat lots of food like ice cream, kimbab, cake and waffles. If you want to come to the party, come to 667 dark avenue on villainous street. *If you want to come to the party, come to 667 dark avenue on Villainous street. Call 010-3739-1977 if you have more questions.
Remember, if you want hard study time than playing all day long, YOU DON'T HAVE TO COME AT ALL. *Remember PS: If you want to study hard than playing all day long, YOU DON'T HAVE TO COME AT ALL but, if you love parties, then run!
Love,
Katherine
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Dear Katherine,
You are such a thoughful angel. Thank you for you invitation letter. I really appreciate you for including me in your list. I hope I could come to your birthday party. I will mark that date. I hope you will grow as a beautiful and kind-hearted lady. Regarding your question about monopoly, yes, I do love monopoly. I won't get tired playing it. I am also looking forward to eat and enjoy every bite of those food with you. For sure my tummy will be good for a lifetime. I hope you will enjoy your marvelous day!
PS: Honestly, your footnote is a bit frightful but, you have a point -- parties are for fun!
Love,
teacher Jhen :D