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작성자 : kwa*** · 2015-04-28
RULES IN MIN-LAND
NO SMOKING AT ALL
People who live, stay, or exist in Min-land shouldn’t smoke.
Smoking doesn’t harm only the people who smoke, they also harm other people beside you.
If people find out that you are smoking, you need to pay fine.
NO DISCRIMINATION BETWEEN PEOPLE
Discrimination between people isn’t allowed.
For example, there should not be any glass ceiling in companies.
no teasing for different skin color
NO AGRICULTURE PESTICIDE AND GMO FOOD
Farmers shouldn’t use pesticide to harvest.
It pollutes food and environment including water cycle and land.
No GMO food for better quantity and quality.
It may seem better than normal food but it might be harful.
NO SMOKING AT ALL
People who live, stay, or exist in Min-land shouldn’t smoke.
Smoking doesn’t harm only the people who smoke, they also harm other people beside you.
If people find out that you are smoking, you need to pay fine.
NO DISCRIMINATION BETWEEN PEOPLE
Discrimination between people isn’t allowed.
For example, there should not be any glass ceiling in companies.
no teasing for different skin color
NO AGRICULTURE PESTICIDE AND GMO FOOD
Farmers shouldn’t use pesticide to harvest.
It pollutes food and environment including water cycle and land.
No GMO food for better quantity and quality.
It may seem better than normal food but it might be harful.
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RULES IN MIN-LAND
NO SMOKING AT ALL
People who live, stay, or exist in Min-land shouldn't smoke.
Smoking doesn't harm only the people who smoke, they also harm the people around them.
If people find out that you are smoking, you will have to pay a fine.
NO DISCRIMINATION BETWEEN PEOPLE
Discrimination between people isn't allowed.
For example, there should not be any glass ceiling in companies.
Don't tease people about their skin color.
NO AGRICULTURE PESTICIDE AND GMO FOOD
Farmers shouldn't use pesticides to harvest.
It pollutes food and the environment including water cycle and land.
No GMO food for better quantity and quality.
It may seem better than normal food but it might be harmful.
NO SMOKING AT ALL
People who live, stay, or exist in Min-land shouldn't smoke.
Smoking doesn't harm only the people who smoke, they also harm the people around them.
If people find out that you are smoking, you will have to pay a fine.
NO DISCRIMINATION BETWEEN PEOPLE
Discrimination between people isn't allowed.
For example, there should not be any glass ceiling in companies.
Don't tease people about their skin color.
NO AGRICULTURE PESTICIDE AND GMO FOOD
Farmers shouldn't use pesticides to harvest.
It pollutes food and the environment including water cycle and land.
No GMO food for better quantity and quality.
It may seem better than normal food but it might be harmful.