My dream house

>>My Dream House

I want a big house which has a large garden, swimming pool, amusement park, music room, book room, and exercise room. I like swimming. I want my own swimming pool.

>>I want to have  my own swimming pool.

I like music. I want to play piano and violin in that music room.

>> I want to play the piano and violin in that music room.

I like to go to amusement park, but it is far away from my home. (but not many far.)

>> but not too far

So I want to place the amusement park in my house.

>>I want to build an amusement park in my house.

And I'll invite all my friends to join this amusement park.

>>And I'll invite all my friends to join in  the amusement park.

  A reason for that I placed exercise room in my house is because I have to exercise often.

>>  The  reason why I  want to place an exercise room in my house is because I have to exercise often.

I don't have to pay to exercise.(like Teakwondo or Kumdo.)

>>I don't need  pay for a fee to exercise like Taekwondo or Kumdo.

Also, I don't have to go to far from home.

>>Also, I don't have to go far away from home.

These are my ideas and reasons why I want this dream house.

>>why I want to have my dream house.