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The place I want to vist ( in Korea)
작성자 : shi*** · 2015-04-21
The place I wnat to visit ( in korea)
I always wanted to visit some place in Korea and that is Busan. I had visited there last year on summer vacation, but I want to visit again. IT was so fun. Actually, I want to vist Haeundae, because there is beutifu sea and I like sea.
I searched about Haeundae and it said that Haeundae is one of the famous place in Busan. I saw the beutiful view of Haeundae in the hotel last year, and I want look and feel it again. Most of people say that they want to go to Haeundae and play there a lot and see the view of it too.
I searched about the traditional food of Haeundae and the answer of it is was a meat and was called 'Jockbal'. I want to taste it.
And they said also there is tradirional cafe. I can't drink coffee, but I think I cna drink that.
I always wanted to visit some place in Korea and that is Busan. I had visited there last year on summer vacation, but I want to visit again. IT was so fun. Actually, I want to vist Haeundae, because there is beutifu sea and I like sea.
I searched about Haeundae and it said that Haeundae is one of the famous place in Busan. I saw the beutiful view of Haeundae in the hotel last year, and I want look and feel it again. Most of people say that they want to go to Haeundae and play there a lot and see the view of it too.
I searched about the traditional food of Haeundae and the answer of it is was a meat and was called 'Jockbal'. I want to taste it.
And they said also there is tradirional cafe. I can't drink coffee, but I think I cna drink that.
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The place I want to visit in Korea.
I have always wanted to visit a place in Korea and that is Busan. I had visited there last year on summer vacation, but I want to visit again. It was so fun. Actually, I want to visit Haeundae, because there is a beautiful sea there and I love the sea.
I researched about Haeundae and it said that Haeundae is one of the famous places in Busan. I saw the beautiful view of Haeundae in the hotel last year, and I want see and feel it again. Most people say that they want to go to Haeundae, play there a lot and see the view of it, too.
I researched about the traditional food of Haeundae and I found out that it is a meat dish called 'Jockbal'. I want to taste it.
And they also said that there is a traditional caf? there. I don't drink coffee, but I think I can try it there.
I have always wanted to visit a place in Korea and that is Busan. I had visited there last year on summer vacation, but I want to visit again. It was so fun. Actually, I want to visit Haeundae, because there is a beautiful sea there and I love the sea.
I researched about Haeundae and it said that Haeundae is one of the famous places in Busan. I saw the beautiful view of Haeundae in the hotel last year, and I want see and feel it again. Most people say that they want to go to Haeundae, play there a lot and see the view of it, too.
I researched about the traditional food of Haeundae and I found out that it is a meat dish called 'Jockbal'. I want to taste it.
And they also said that there is a traditional caf? there. I don't drink coffee, but I think I can try it there.