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My weekend

작성자 : woo***   ·   2015-04-21

On saturday, me and my parents went to Yeoido Park.We took subway. We ate lunch first. After lunch, we rented bikes and went to Yeoido Park. Off we go! We had fun times. The air was fresh and cool. I saw someone playing basketball. It looks fun, but I'm not good at basketball.
We spun around and around. Though it was the same route, it was fun. I'll go there next weekend, too.

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On saturday, me and my parents went to Yeoido Park. We took   subway. We ate lunch first. After lunch, we rented bikes and went to Yeoido Park. Off we go! We had fun times. The air was fresh and cool. I saw someone playing basketball. It looks fun, but I'm not good at basketball.
We spun around and around. Though it was the same route, it was fun. I'll go there next weekend, too.

~> Last Saturday, may parents and I went to Yeouido Park. We took the subway. We ate lunch first. After lunch, we rented bikes and went to the park. Off we go! We had fun. The air was fresh and cool. I saw someone playing basketball. It looks fun, but I'm not good at basketball.
We roamed around and around. Though it was the same route, it was fun. I'll go there next weekend, too.

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