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The festivals of Korea
작성자 : shi*** · 2015-04-21
The festivals of Korea
There are a lot of festivals in Korea and some of people will concern about what they should join in. So I am heloing you to suggest which to join.
First, I will prefer '가야 culture festival'.
It tells about 가야's history and also about Korea's history. We can study a lot of old culture and stuffs there. You can also hear the traditional music of '가야'. That is why I am suggesting this culture festival.
Second, you can also join 'Boryeung Mud festival. Mud is nice for our skin and Boryeung is a contry so we will have a real nice vacation. You can have a mudfight there, too.
These two are the best festival I know in Korea. I learned it on socail class time. They are also saying that spending here is nice for our eceonmy.
There are a lot of festivals in Korea and some of people will concern about what they should join in. So I am heloing you to suggest which to join.
First, I will prefer '가야 culture festival'.
It tells about 가야's history and also about Korea's history. We can study a lot of old culture and stuffs there. You can also hear the traditional music of '가야'. That is why I am suggesting this culture festival.
Second, you can also join 'Boryeung Mud festival. Mud is nice for our skin and Boryeung is a contry so we will have a real nice vacation. You can have a mudfight there, too.
These two are the best festival I know in Korea. I learned it on socail class time. They are also saying that spending here is nice for our eceonmy.
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The festivals of Korea
There are a lot of festivals in Korea and someof people are concerned about what they should join in. So I am going to suggest which one you should join.[hollo: this is a non-standard English word]
First, I prefer '°¡¾ß culture festival'.
It tells about °¡¾ß's history and also about Korea's history. We can study a lot of old culture and stuff there. You can also hear the traditional music of '°¡¾ß'. That is why I am suggesting this culture festival.
Second, you can also join 'Boryeung Mud festival. Mud is nice for our skin and Boryeung is a country so we will have a real nice vacation. You can have a mud fight there, too.
These two are the best festivals I know in Korea. I learned it from my Social Studies class. They are also saying that spending here is nice for our economy.
There are a lot of festivals in Korea and some
First, I prefer '°¡¾ß culture festival'.
It tells about °¡¾ß's history and also about Korea's history. We can study a lot of old culture and stuff there. You can also hear the traditional music of '°¡¾ß'. That is why I am suggesting this culture festival.
Second, you can also join 'Boryeung Mud festival. Mud is nice for our skin and Boryeung is a country so we will have a real nice vacation. You can have a mud fight there, too.
These two are the best festivals I know in Korea. I learned it from my Social Studies class. They are also saying that spending here is nice for our economy.