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작성자 : ang***   ·   2015-04-20

Hi T. Jhen. Today is Monday!I hope you will have a nice week. Well, let's get to the point. My ideal birthday party.Hmm. I want to have my birthday on a grass field. Just like a picnic! But, unfortunately, I cannot.My birthday is October.(sigh) And I want to eat kimbab or hamburger. I love them! But maybe I have to eat hamburger. I will eat kimbab on Wednesday.>< I hope Sally and Irene comes,too. And my classmates. If my birthday is summer, I want to go to the pool. I'm a dolphin.Yoo Hoo! I don't koww if it's posseble, but I want a sleepover. Once, I played until 10 o' clock. however, it was N.O.T a sleepover. My parent doesn't want me to go and sleep alone without them. I don't know why. Maybe they're so protective(But of course I love them <3 ). Ahh, I want , at my birthday , that I can do everything I want to..... For Free!
THANK YOU FOR CAREFULLY READING THIS ASSAY. WHOEVER IT IS. I LOVE YOU!

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Hi T. Jhen. Today is Monday! I hope you will have a nice week. Well, let's get to the point. My ideal birthday party. Hmm.. I want to have my birthday on a grass field. Just like a picnic! But, unfortunately, I cannot. My birthday is October. >> My birthday is on October. (sigh) And I want to eat kimbab or hamburger. I love them! But maybe I have to eat hamburger. >> But maybe I will have hamburger to eat. I will eat kimbab on Wednesday. >< I hope Sally and Irene comes, too.  And my classmates. >> I hope Sally and Irene will come, and my classmates too. If my birthday is summer, I want to go to the pool. >> If my birthday is in summer, I want to go to the pool. I'm a dolphin.Yoo Hoo! I don't koww if it's posseble, but I want a sleepover. >> I don't know if it's possible but I want a sleepover. Once, I played until 10 o' clock. however, it was N.O.T a sleepover.  >> I once played until 10 o'clock, however, it was not a sleepover. My parent doesn't want me to go and sleep alone without them. >> My parents don't want me to go and sleep alone without them. I don't know why. Maybe they're so protective (But of course I love them <3 ). Ahh, I want , at my birthday , that I can do everything I want to.. For Free!
>> Ahh! On my birthday, I want to do everything I want for free!
THANK YOU FOR CAREFULLY READING THIS ASSAY (ESSAY). WHOEVER IT IS. I LOVE YOU!

You are very welcome, Katherine!~ Thank you for doing and submittng your homework, too.

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