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Dialogue

작성자 : woo***   ·   2015-04-16

Write a Dialogue

Sam and Max are talking.

Sam: Hi, Max!
Max: Hi, Sam!
Sam: What are you doing? Are you removing or separating something?
Max: Yes. I’m taking(separating) these two cups out.
Sam: Can I help you?
Max: Sure. Thanks.
Sam: How can I help you?
Max: You can just grab the first cup and I will pull the second cup.
A minute later...

Max: I’m getting tired. Why can’t I separate these two cups?
Sam: Wait, Max! I have an idea.
Max: Tell me, Sam.
Sam: First, can you bring a bowl?
Max: Yes.
Max brought a bowl to Sam.
Sam: Then, I’ll pour some warm water into the bowl.
Sam poured some warm water into the first cup.
Sam: Can you pour some cold water into the first cup?
Max: Yes.
Max poured some cold water into the first cup. Then, the two cups separated!
Max: Wow, Sam! You are a genius!
Sam: I learned it from the science class.
Max: You are my real soul mate! Thanks, buddy.
Sam: Your welcome. I have to go. Bye.
Max: Bye.

답변

Write a Dialogue

Sam and Max are talking.

Sam: Hi, Max!
Max: Hi, Sam!
Sam: What are you doing? Are you removing or separating something?
Max: Yes. I???m taking(separating) these two cups out.
>> I'm

Sam: Can I help you?
Max: Sure. Thanks.
Sam: How can I help you?
Max: You can just grab the first cup and I will pull the second cup.
A minute later...

Max: I???m  getting tired. Why can???t I separate these two cups?


>> I'm getting tired. Why can't I separate these two cups?



Sam: Wait, Max! I have an idea.
Max: Tell me, Sam.
Sam: First, can you bring a bowl?
Max: Yes.
Max brought a bowl to Sam.
Sam: Then, I???ll pour some warm water into the bowl.
>> I'll

Sam poured some warm water into the first cup.
Sam: Can you pour some cold water into the first cup?
Max: Yes.
Max poured some cold water into the first cup. Then, the two cups separated!
Max: Wow, Sam! You are a genius!
Sam: I learned it from the science class.
Max: You are my real soul mate! Thanks, buddy.
Sam: Your welcome. I have to go. Bye.
Max: Bye.


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Hello Woohyun! Well, your compositions are getting better. You can be a good writer! I'm so impressed on the way you compose a dialogue using the idioms. Keep it up! Just few reminders for you. Take note of the pronouns and its apostrophe. That's all. I look forward to your future compositions. See you in the class! 

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