English is important because it is the universal language. There are many languages and it's hard to learn all of them for us to communicate with the people around the world. So, we should only learn one and that is English. English is hard but once you learn it, it's fun.

Note:
*Use BECAUSE to connect words, phrases and clauses in a sentence.
*English is the universal language because it is the official language in many countries.
*UNIVERSAL ~ relating to everyong in the world
*COMMUNICATE ~ to talk or write to someone in order to share information with them
Example: I communicate with my friends by email.
*ONCE ~ as soon as
Example: Once I finish my homework, I will sleep.
*FUN ~ something that gives you enjoyment or pleasure
Example: Playing board games is fun.
*FUNNY ~ making you smile or laugh
Example: The movie is funny.

Hello, Erin! I want you to read again the corrected composition and analyze the sentences. Study the words and their meaning above. Don't be in a hurry when making your composition.:) Enjoy your weekend! See you on Tuesday, Erin!:)