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작성자 : dnt***   ·   2015-04-16

teacher I'm sunny
I'm little confused the word 'vision'. I understood it future plans as a teacher
Am I right?


Q. Tell me about vision as a teacher.
A. I would study child psycology and education to help understanding for my student more.
Because I was not major in education, I might lack of understand than other teachers who was major in education. Through the studying, I would improve my skills and communicate them well. And I also would be an expert in my field.

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teacher I'm sunny
Correction:Teacher, I'm Sunny.
Explanation: Be mindful when to use capitalization in your
sentences. Usually, the first letter of the subject or names are
capitalized.

I'm little confused the word 'vision'. I understood it future plans as a
teacher
Correction:? I'm a little confused with the word "vision". I understood it as future plans as a teacher.
Explanation: It's better to used "a little" in this sentence because
you're just a bit confused about the word "vision". "A Little" means
some while "Little" means almost no. Don't forget to use proper
prepositions to complete your sentences.

Vision means a description of what would you like to achieve in the
long term future.


Am I right??--> ?This sentence is Correct


Q. Tell me about vision as a teacher
Correction:
?
Q. Tell me about your vision as a teacher.?
Explanation: You should use a determiner "your" in this sentence
because?this question is associated to you.

A. I would study child psycology?and education to help understanding for my student more.
?Correction:?
A. I would study about child psychology and education to
help me?understand my students more.
Explanation: Be careful with the proper spelling of words. It's
"PSYCHOLOGY". Take note of your sentence construction as well to easily express what you mean to say.

Because I was not major in education, I might lack of understand than other teachers who was major in education.
Correction:?Since, I was not an education major, I might lack?
understanding/knowledge
compared to other teachers who?
are education major.
Explanation: It's better if you will start your sentence with "Since" in
this one and? use the be verb "are"? which refers to the subject
"teachers".

Through the studying, I would improve my skills and communicate them
?well.
Correction: Through studying ...........................
Explanation: It's better to say Through studying, instead of
"Through the studying".







And I also would be an expert in my field.
Correction:
I would also be an expert in my field.
Explanation: The coordinating conjunction "and" connect words,
phrases. Do not use a coordinating conjunction to begin every
sentence.




Hi Sunny,
It's Teacher Leslie here. Thank you for doing your homework.
I've provided corrections so you better take note of these. If you
have questions, please do not hesitate to ask me and see you
tomorrow. . Have a good night.

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