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작성자 : js1***   ·   2015-04-15

To:Teachr Joanna
Hi teacher Joanna!
Today at school I macke a balloon
It was fun but my frend tell to my
"give mi that baiioon!! ...I will doitt!!!" so
I giv the balloon but pop!!! !o! she break my balloon "omy!!!"
"my baiioon!!" sorry" it was not good byebye
Frome:Jesica!!!










sorry

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To:Teachr Joanna
Hi teacher Joanna!
Today at school I macke a balloon
It was fun but my frend tell to my
"give mi that baiioon!! ...I will doitt!!!" so
I giv the balloon but pop!!! !o! she break my balloon "omy!!!"
"my baiioon!!" sorry" it was not good byebye
Frome:Jesica!!!


To: Teacher Joanna


Hi, Teacher Joanna! Today,made a balloon at school.
It was fun but my friend told me, "Give me that balloon!! I will do it!" So, I gave her the balloon but it popped. Oh! She popped my balloon. Omg! My balloon! Sorry, it was not good. Bye bye!


From: Jessica

Remember:
*Be careful of the spelling of your words.
Example: teacher - teachr
               make - macke
               friend- frend
               give- giv
               balloon- baiioon
               from- frome

*Be reminded of your verb tenses.
Past Tense
Examples:   make - made
                  give- gave
                  pop- popped


Comment:
Hello, Jessica!
Thank you very much for sending me your homework. Please, remember the following reminders and next time we will have more practices regarding this. See you and keep up the good work!
-Teacher Joanna

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