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My favorite season
작성자 : gml*** · 2015-04-09
My favorite season is winter.
The reason is in winter, we can do many things.
The example is we can do skiing,skating and many other things.
Winter next season is spring, in winter it's all to do ready for spring.
Espectally,in winter my favorite sport is snowfight.
because,it's funny and many children can do this sport.
The reason is in winter, we can do many things.
The example is we can do skiing,skating and many other things.
Winter next season is spring, in winter it's all to do ready for spring.
Espectally,in winter my favorite sport is snowfight.
because,it's funny and many children can do this sport.
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My favorite season is Winter because I can do many things.
I can go skiing, skating and do many other things. I like snowball fight the most because it's fun and many children can do it.
Note:
*Always capitalize the first letter of the seasons.
*Use because to connect two ideas.
*go skiing/skating/snowboarding
*snowfight ~> SNOWBALL FIGHT
*Just talk about your favorite season, which is Winter.
Erin, thank you for submitting your homework! When making a composition, think it over and don't be in a hurry. Try to use other words and make your composition longer.:) Enjoy your weekend!