( Are zoos good for animals? )
-In my opinion, I think zoos aren't good for animals.
When an animal live too long in zoo, it can forget to live in the wild. Because the zoo keeper adjusts the temperature, and (feed them prepared food.) The animal can lose adjusting body temperature by its fur, and lose hunting small animals. This is the biggest problem. And, many animals will die because of tourists' giving them food.  
Many animals are living in zoos, and they are too much stressed. I think people should have to improve animals' health and free them to the wild.

-Bella xp

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Howdy Bella!

Thank you for making your homework right away. I appreciate your effort and all the things that you contributed in the class. You are smart and willing to learn more. Keep growing. ^^

~Take care always and enjoy your weekend.  

^Teacher Cassie