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작성자 : sky*** · 2015-04-02
1. I purchased a handmade handbag.
2. I put on lotion on my body and my body was greasy.
3. The man released ten million birds.
4. My waighit is increasing.
2. I put on lotion on my body and my body was greasy.
3. The man released ten million birds.
4. My waighit is increasing.
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Hi, Claire! Happy weekend!?¾ How are you enjoying your weekend?
This is your correction:
1. I purchased a handmade handbag.
>>CORRECT!
2. I put on lotion on my body and my body was greasy.
>>I put lotion on my body and it became greasy.
3. The man released ten million birds.
>>CORRECT!
4. My waighit is increasing.
4. My waighit is increasing.
>> My weight is increasing.
Great job, Claire! Hope you to get higher score on our next spelling bee! ^^
teacher Jhen ^^