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작성자 : hsj*** · 2015-04-02
Middle school is not the same as elementary school.
There are different teacher each subject.
My homeroom teacher is a English teacher.
She is very pretty and nice. I like her.
And my school uniform is good.I'm happy with that.
But school's finishing time is too late.
So I'm so tired these days.
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STUDENT: title:middle school
CORRECT: Title: Middle School
EXPLANATION:
a. The first letter of any writing should always be capitalized.
b. The first letters of every word should also be capitalized if they are titles.
STUDENT: Middle school is not the same as elementary school.
CORRECT!
STUDENT: There are different teacher each subject.
CORRECT: There are different teachers in each subject.
EXPLANATION:
a. The word "different" made your subject plural.
STUDENT: My homeroom teacher is a English teacher.
CORRECT: My homeroom teacher is an English teacher.
EXPLANATION:
a.
We use the indefinite article "an" if the noun starts with a vowel.
STUDENT: She is very pretty and nice. I like her.
CORRECT!
STUDENT: And my school uniform is good. I'm happy with that.
ACCEPTABLE.
*We must remember not to use conjunctions as the first word of a sentence as much as possible because most of the time, it hinders our sentence from expressing a complete thought. Also, put a space after every punctuation mark.
STUDENT: But school's finishing time is too late.
CORRECT: But school ends late.
STUDENT: So I'm so tired these days.
COMMENTS:
You are not in the mood the past few days so I have figured out that you really are tired. Anyway, it's going to be a weekend so enjoy it, Emily!