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Alice homework

작성자 : noh***   ·   2015-04-01

I like playground.
Because it is fun.
I like music class.
Because I like play music.
It is fun.

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Hello!
 Alice, Thank you for doing your homework today. I really appreciate your effort.Keep it up! Aim high!


** Writing
>> Question:

1. What is/are your favorite places? and why?

CORRECTIONS:

Alice: I like playground. Because it is fun.
Correct: I like playing in the playground. Because it's fun.

Alice: I like music class. Because I like  play music.It is fun.
Correct: I like going to music class.Because I like music. It's fun!

Thank you Alice. Good night!


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