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작성자 : rub*** · 2015-03-30
My homework is 'What would you do if you saw someone showing no courtesy to others?'.
Sometimes, people in public places acts no courtesy. Like, calling very loudly and laughing very much. I don't experience about someone shows no courtesy. However,I frown and give a look to someone if I saw someone showing no courtesy to others because I don't want to know about someone's private business.For example, A boy calls to his friend about this morning. But, I don't really care about what he did this morning.
Someone showing no courtesy to others could have tried to go between the cars when someone is in the subway. Or at least someone should have talked more quietly.
I hope everyone keep rank in public places.
Sometimes, people in public places acts no courtesy. Like, calling very loudly and laughing very much. I don't experience about someone shows no courtesy. However,I frown and give a look to someone if I saw someone showing no courtesy to others because I don't want to know about someone's private business.For example, A boy calls to his friend about this morning. But, I don't really care about what he did this morning.
Someone showing no courtesy to others could have tried to go between the cars when someone is in the subway. Or at least someone should have talked more quietly.
I hope everyone keep rank in public places.
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My homework is 'What would you do if you saw someone showing no courtesy to others?'.
Sometimes, peopledon't show courtesy in public places, like calling someone very loudly and laughing very much. I don't want to experience to be discourteous to someone. However, I just frown and give a look to someone if I see him or her for being discourteous to others because I don't want to know about his or her private business. For example, a boy calls to his friend about this morning. But, I don't really care about what he did this morning. Someone showing no courtesy to others could have tried to go between the cars when someone is in the subway or at least someone should have talked more quietly. I hope everyone keep their manners in public places.
Sometimes, peopledon't show courtesy in public places, like calling someone very loudly and laughing very much. I don't want to experience to be discourteous to someone. However, I just frown and give a look to someone if I see him or her for being discourteous to others because I don't want to know about his or her private business. For example, a boy calls to his friend about this morning. But, I don't really care about what he did this morning. Someone showing no courtesy to others could have tried to go between the cars when someone is in the subway or at least someone should have talked more quietly. I hope everyone keep their manners in public places.
I don't experience about someone not showing courtesy. (What do you mean in this sentence?) Do you mean you don't want to experience to be discourteous to someone.