Iwould like totalk aboutchuseok, theKorean Thanksgiving holiday. Dhuseokis held on Augest 15th inlunar month. So it is usually isSeptember or October. It is celebrated in Korea.it was begun to Thank theancestors for looking after the families. DuringCHuseok, people play traditional games and sing and dance together.Chuseok shows the importance of thanking the ancestors.

CORRECT: I wouldlike to talk aboutChuseok.,the Korean Thanksgiving holiday. Chuseokstarts on August 15th which is the lunar month. It is usuallycelebrated in September or October. Itis celebrated in Korea. Itwasbegun to thankthe ancestors for looking after their families. During Cheusok,people play traditional games , sing and dance together. Chuseokshows the importance of thanking the ancestors.

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