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작성자 : woo***   ·   2015-03-26

It was a normal day. I got up at 6:30, and I done Kumon. I ate breakfast too. Then, I went to school. I arrived at 8:30. I was not late. I read book before class started. The book's name is "Lucky Pig at the Corner of the Road".(It is a Korean book.) I'll tell you a summery. One day, a store moved in a city called 'Jindallae'. People wondered who is the owner of that store. One morning, that store opened for 10 people. People waited and waited. One student(he is the main person.) saw the people is waiting, so he told his parents about that. So, his mother and father waited too. But he (the main person) saw the difference about people's body. They became pigs! But no one seemed to know that. Finally, his parent's turn came. They received a jar that makes things twice. And, they became pigs too! So he visited the Lucky Pig. He said that if they broke that jar, they would return person again. So he waited , and waited...
After I read this book, We studied English. We played some powerpoint games. It was fun.
After that, I studied social studies, and other things. Today was fun day.

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It was a normal day. I got up at 6:30, and I done Kumon.

>>I have done Kumon.

I ate breakfast too. Then, I went to school. I arrived at 8:30. I was not late. I read book before class started.

>>I have read a book before the class  started.

The book's name is "Lucky Pig at the Corner of the Road".(It is a Korean book.) I'll tell you a summery.

>> summary

One day, a store moved in a city called 'Jindallae'. People wondered who is the owner of that store. One morning, that store opened for 10 people. People waited and waited. One student(he is the main person.) saw the people is waiting, so he told his parents about that. So, his mother and father waited too. But he (the main person) saw the difference about people's body. They became pigs! But no one seemed to know that. Finally, his parent's turn came. They received a jar that makes things twice. And, they became pigs too! So he visited the Lucky Pig. He said that if they broke that jar, they would return person again. So he waited , and waited...
After I read this book, We studied English. We played some power point games. It was fun.
After that, I studied social studies, and other things. Today was fun day.

>> Today was a fun day.

 

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