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작성자 : rub***   ·   2015-03-25

My homework is 'Make an essay about the advantages of calling and texting.'.



I think that calling's advantage is raising vividness because of voice. Besides, it's convenient for us to talk without typing letter, just talking. Old people is used to calling.


Texting's advantage is used to type emoticon. Like, ^^,ㅠㅠ,ㅎㅎ(it means 'ha ha') and ♥♡. It is fun to type many kinds of emoticon. Youngsters is used to texting.

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I think that calling's advantage is raising vividness because of voice.
> I think that the advantage of calling is that it is more vivid because you can hear the other person's voice.

Old people is used to calling.
> Old people are used to calling.

Texting's advantage is used to type emoticon.

> Texting's advantage is  that you can use emoticons.

Like, ^^,¤Ð¤Ð,¤¾¤¾(it means 'ha ha') and ?¾?½.
> Correct!


It is fun to type many kinds of emoticon.
> It is fun to type/use many kinds of emoticons.

Youngsters is used to texting.
> Youngsters are used to texting.

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