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작성자 : woo*** · 2015-03-24
On Saturday,it was little windy outside. I went to learn Chinese, Korean history, and table tennis. It was fun. Korean history and table tennis were litle hard, but I had fun.
Next, I took a subway to go back to my home. I ate lunch, and I rode a bike. It is exciting to riding a bike. At 5:00, I went to kumdo academy to perform our skills. I was nervous, but I did my best. I cut the cucumber, and I jumped rope. I saw some funny things. It was fun time.
Next, I took a subway to go back to my home. I ate lunch, and I rode a bike. It is exciting to riding a bike. At 5:00, I went to kumdo academy to perform our skills. I was nervous, but I did my best. I cut the cucumber, and I jumped rope. I saw some funny things. It was fun time.
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On Saturday, it was little windy outside. I went to learn Chinese, Korean history, and table tennis. It was fun. Korean history and table tennis were litle hard, but I had fun.
>> little (correct spelling)
>> Korean history and table tennis was little hard.
Next, I took a subway to go back to my home. I ate lunch, and I rode a bike.
>> to go back home
It is exciting to riding a bike. At 5:00, I went to kumdo academy to perform our skills.
>> Kumdo Academy
I was nervous, but I did my best. I cut the cucumber, and I jumped rope. I saw some funny things. It was fun time.