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Homwork for T.Kathline

작성자 : war***   ·   2015-03-24

My favorite day of the week is Saturday.
First, I can get up late.
Second, I only do little math and I can rest!
Third, I can see a movie in the morning!
Forth, I go to science school and I can make somthing special.
These are my reasons why is my best day is saturday.

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Warren: My favorite day of the week is Saturday.
>>Correct!

Warren: First, I can get up late.
>> Because, first, I can get up late.

Warren: Second, I only do little math and I can rest!
>> Second, I only have to do a little math then I can rest.

Warren: Third, I can see a movie in the morning
>>Correct!

Warren: Forth, I go to science school and I can make somthing special.
>> Fourth, I can go to science school and make something special

These are my reasons why is my best day is saturday.
>> These are my reason why my favorite day is Saturday.

**Great job Warren! Thank you for always submitting your homework on time.^^ You get better and better  with you sentence constructions and I commend you on that!**

-Teacher Kathline☺

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