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작성자 : goo***   ·   2015-03-24

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Hello,
   Ray, Thank you for doing your homework today. I am very happy that you're always participative in our class. Keep it up!


QUESTION:
1. When is your birthday?
2. What do you like to do for your birthday?


Brian


1. My birthday is April 1st.

2. I want my birthday, chicken,steak,pork...
eating delicious food. and, I will going to the park. ^^1. My birthday is April 1st.

2. I want my birthday, chicken,steak,pork...
eating delicious food. and, I will going to the park. ^^


CORRECTION


1. My birthday is on April 1st.


2. On my birthday, I want to eat delicious foods like chicken, steak and pork. I will also take a walk in the park and maybe I will play with my friends.



NOTE


Ray, Nice Job. But,please do check your spelling and proper construction of a sentence. Thank you and Good night.


~ Teacher Keren

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