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작성자 : mir***   ·   2015-03-23

is my birthday becase that day is my birthday and that day growonups give me a
prasent

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HOONY: HOME WARK

CORRECT: Homework


EXPLANATION: Be mindful of your spelling.

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HOONY: is my birthday becase that day is my birthday and that day growonups give me a

prasent


CORRECT: My favorite event is my birthday because it's the day I was born and grown-ups give me presents.


EXPLANATION: A sentence needs to express a complete thought. Sentences should be complete thoughts and not fragments. Try to avoid using the same words in a sentence to avoid redundancy. Also, be mindful of your spelling.


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Hello, Hoony! Thank you for submitting your homework! You did well in expressing your thoughts! Keep it up!


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