My birthday is in January 25th. many people come my home.they buy many present to me.we eat lunch together.then, we go to shopping. my mun buy present tome.We eat dinner at night.my friends sing a happy birthday to me!!then we have a game!last we go home sleep.

 My birthday is January 25th. Many people came to my home. They brought many presents. We ate lunch together. Then we went shopping. My mom bought a present form me.We eat dinner and my friends sang "Happy birthday" to me!! Then we haa a game! Lastly, we all went home to sleep.

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