Actually, my favorite trip is going to ever land.
>> Actually, my favorite trip is when we went to Everland.
Because we saw a tarzan play.
>> Because we saw a Tarzan play then.
And after the play ended we got to take a picture with a monkey and a parrot thats traned.
>> And after the play, we got to take a picture with a trained monkey and a trained parrot.
Because the boss was my dads friend.
>> Because the boss is my dad's friend.
When I held the monkeys hand I was scared.
>> I felt scared when I held the monkey's hand.
But I was happy.
>> But I was also happy.