CORRECT: Germs can spread very quickly.

EXPLANATION: Be mindful of your spelling.

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DAINE: fill up= I can fill up whith my yummy lunch.

CORRECT: I fill up my lunch box with a yummy lunch.

EXPLANATION: Your sentence is rephrased because "fill up" means "to become full, or to make something become full".

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DAINE: look around =I can look around whith my eyes because my eyes are very good.

CORRECT: I can look around with my eyes because I have good eyesight.

EXPLANATION: Be mindful of your spelling. Also, we used the word "eyesight" to refer to your ability to see.

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DAINE: brig When I go to school I bring my pencilcase when I go to school everyday.

CORRECT: When I go to school, I bring my pencil case everyday.

CORRECT: I bring my pencil case when I go to school everyday.

EXPLANATION: Avoid using the same phrase in one sentence.

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DAINE: understand=I can understand my friends talking sound.

CORRECT: I can understand what my friends are talking about.

EXPLANATION: Your sentence is rephrased because "understand" means "to know the meaning of something that someone says".

If you like you could change your sentence like this:

CORRECT: I can hear my friends' voices.

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Hello, Daine! Thank you for submitting your homework! I'm impressed with your ideas! Keep it up!

- Teacher Kate