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작성자 : js1***   ·   2015-03-19

to:teacher joanna


Hi teacher Joanna^.^

wath ar you doing now???
I"m now doing homework ^.^
I"m angry now because jason i"s not listen to my ghrrrrrr * = *!!!
it was fun!!!
but...by by!!!!


Frome :Jassica

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to:teacher joanna


Hi teacher Joanna^.^

wath ar you doing now???
I"m now doing homework ^.^
I"m angry now because jason i"s not listen to my ghrrrrrr * = *!!!
it was fun!!!
but...by by!!!!


Frome :Jassica

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To: Teacher Joanna

Hi, teacher Joanna!
What are you doing now?
I'm doing my homeowork.
I'm angry because Jason is not listening to me.
It was fun!
But bye bye!

From: Jessica   

Explanation:
1. Please take note of your spellings Jessica.
    frome - from
    wath- what
    ar- are 
    i's - is
    by by - bye-bye

2. Capitalize the proper noun and the beginning of your senetnces.

Explanation:
High Five!

Hi, Jessica!
Thank you for sending me your homework. Please keep up making your diary entry. This will help you on improving your vocabulary and sentence construction skills.
-Teacher Joanna

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