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작성자 : lsh*** · 2015-03-19
i will should be a animals i want to lion. because lion is very strong and
king of animals^^ and lion is so great and large so i want to should be a lion !!!!!!!! end
king of animals^^ and lion is so great and large so i want to should be a lion !!!!!!!! end
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Kevin: i will should be a animals i want to lion.
Correct: If I will be an animal, I want to be a lion.
Kevin: because lion is very strong and king of animals
Correct: Because lion is very strong and the king of animals.
Kevin: and lion is so great and large so i want to should be a lion
Correct: And lion is so great and large so, I want to be a lion.
Kevin always remember that sentences always start with a capital letter and ends with a period (.).
GREAT JOB! YOU CAN DO BETTER!