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homework daine .......

작성자 : dai***   ·   2015-03-18

pillow=I have a very beautiful pillow .

noisy= My sister is very noisy.

coin=In my room there is no coin.

found =I found my sisters thing and my thing.

fly away= When I see a bird it fly away I don't know why.

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DAINE:


pillow=I have a very beautiful pillow .

noisy= My sister is very noisy.

*** CORRECT! GOOD JOB! ***

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DAINE: coin=In my room there is no coin.

CORRECT: In my room, there's no coin.

EXPLANATION: Use the punctuation mark comma (,) to separate the phrase from the rest of the sentence.

You can also rephrase it like this:

CORRECT: There's no coin in my room.

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DAINE: found =I found my sisters thing and my thing.

CORRECT: I found my sister's ___ and my ___.

EXPLANATION: Don't forget the apostrophe (') after s to show possession. Also, you can mention the things you found to make your sentence more specific. It could be socks, shoes, etc. Using the word ??¡Æthing??¡¾ is too general.

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DAINE: fly away= When I see a bird it fly away I don't know why.

CORRECT: When I see a bird, it flies away and I don't know why.

EXPLANATION: A singular subject needs a singular predicate. The conjunction ??¡Æand??¡¾ is used to connect your sentences.

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Hello, Daine! Thank you for submitting your homework promptly. You did a good job in using these words in your won sentence! Keep up the good work! :D

Take care always!

- Teacher Kate

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