Ray,
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CORRECTION:

Ray: I want to visit countries are
Correct: I want to visit these countries.

Ray:
number 1: Hawaii. Because, I love ocean and beach. ^*^.
number 2: Canada. Because, Canada is have a fine.
number 3: Australia. Because,I want to see opera house~~
number 4: Kenya. Because, so many animals live there.
number 5: Korea. Because,Korean hidden good place are a lot.

Correction:

First, I want to visit Hawaii. Because I love ocean and beaches.
Second:  Canada. Because it looks peaceful.
Third: Australia. Because I want to see the Opera house.
Fourth: Kenya. Because I can see different kinds of animals there.
Fifth: Korea, because I want to visit Korea's beautiful places.

Ray:
And, I don't want to visit Japan. Because, During the Japanese occupation,
Japan is one of our colony of Japan, people racing around the country because her killed.

Correction:

I don't want to visit Japan. During the Japanese War they were also invade Korea and kill most of Korean armies.

Note:
 Ray Please study your correction. Thank you and Good night.

~ Teacher Keren