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My weekend

작성자 : woo***   ·   2015-03-17

On Saturday, I took subway to go to church. And I waited for the class started. When teacher came to the room, we started Chinese class. It was fun to reading four intonations in Chinese. And we have to do homework until the next Saturday.
After the Chinese class, I went to Korean history class. I studied history(of course). It was the first time so we started at prehistory era. It is fun to larning History.
After the Korean history class, I went to table tennis class. It was exciting. I learned some things.(like how to grab the racket, or how to swing the racket.) It ws little hard but fun. I enjoyed it.
The next day,(Sunday) My family went to church. When the church ended, I played with my friends. And we went back home. And I done Kumon, then I rode a bike.(It is really fun to ride a bike.) And, I went back home and done my school homework and ate dinner.
These two days were fun. I hope next weekends are like this weedkend!

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On Saturday, I took subway to go to church. And I waited for the class started.


>> I took a subway going to church.



When teacher came to the room, we started Chinese class. It was fun to reading four intonations in Chinese.


>> It was fun to read intonations in Chinese.


And we have to do homework until the next Saturday.
After the Chinese class, I went to Korean history class. I studied history(of course). It was the first time so we started at prehistory era. It is fun to larning History.


>> It was fun to ?learn History.



After the Korean history class, I went to table tennis class. It was exciting. I learned some things.(like how to grab the racket, or how to swing the racket.) It ws little hard but fun.


>> It was little hard but fun.

I enjoyed it.
The next day,(Sunday) My family went to church. When the church ended, I played with my friends. And we went back home. And I done Kumon,


>> We went back home and??after?I finished my ?Kumon class, I rode a bike.


then I rode a bike.(It is really fun to ride a bike.) And, I went back home and done my school homework and ate dinner.
These two days were fun. I hope next weekends are like this weedkend!


>>weekend

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