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작성자 : cho*** · 2015-03-15
Weekend schedule
I get up at eight o'clock then i wash my face.and i do my homework.play smart game .In the afternoon i going to shopping with my family.we buy many many things for food.And have dilicious dinner. go home i go to take a shower.ten o'clock i go to sleep.This is my weekend schedule.
I get up at eight o'clock then i wash my face.and i do my homework.play smart game .In the afternoon i going to shopping with my family.we buy many many things for food.And have dilicious dinner. go home i go to take a shower.ten o'clock i go to sleep.This is my weekend schedule.
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Weekend schedule
I get up at eight o'clock then i wash my face.and i do my homework.play smart (?) game .In the afternoon i going to shopping with my family.we buy many many things for food.And have dilicious dinner. go home i go to take a shower.ten o'clock i go to sleep.This is my weekend schedule.
I get up at eight o'clock then i wash my face
Weekend Schedule
I get up at eight o'clock. Then, I wash my face and do my homework. I play phone games. In the afternoon, I'll go shopping with my family. We'll buy a lot of things like food. After that, we'll have delicious dinner. Then, go home and take a shower. Lastly, I go to sleep at ten o'clock. This is my weekend schedule.
REMINDERS:
* Always CAPITALIZE the pronoun I.
* Put a comma after the transitional words or phrases and TIME EXPRESSIONS if it's the beginning of your sentence. ( Then, .... After that, .... In the afternoon, .... )
* Be careful with your VERB TENSE. ( I going to shopping ~> I will go shopping )
* Study more about transitional words and phrases so you can create power links between your ideas.