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What is my favorite holiday?

작성자 : 197***   ·   2015-03-16

My favorite holiday is......
A Cristmas!!!!!
Beacause......
Christmas in winter,and jesus is born in that thay.

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My favorite holiday is......
A Cristmas!!!!!
Beacause......
Christmas in winter,and jesus is born in that thay.


~> My favorite holiday is Christmas because it is in winter and Jesus was born on that day.

~> My favorite holiday is Christmas because it is in winter and it is Jesus's birthday.

REMINDERS:
* Don't overuse?PUNCTUATION MARKS like period. You can put these sentences in one.

* Be careful with your spelling of the following:?
(X) beacause ~> because
(X) thay ~> day


*?We capitalize Jesus because it is a proper noun.??


* We used the PAST TENSE for things that already happened in the past.
( is born = was born )


* We used ON for the word day.

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